Okay, i guess if this is your first then fine, you get a three, not a two. Listen to the review before me, he covers some good points.
Show your stuff to several people before you submit. Get their feedback and use their comments. Then revise and rewrite. The quality of this flash is surprisingly terrible. I'm surprised it made it through the portal, and even front page of all things...
Good luck on your next one, i guess...
This was fun, I'd say add more to it and make it longer, more gags...
Initially a great idea.
On another note - I was just singing this song at work the other day lol
I'm impressed with the effort of stop animation - it's done very well
Make more, make them longer - After watching so many HORRIBLE new flash that floods in, it's nice to see something different
How the hell was this a collaborative effort?
Did one of you say, I want to find a funny pic of Jim Carrey...
Another say, let's make it move to some elevator music...
Then some kid walked into the conversation saying, Let's put this on newgrounds...
Overall - its like animutation if the original founder died and piconjo ate his liver...
How did this get past judgment?
I had more fun on my period...
It wouldve been funnier if there was more to it, maybe something that the viewer didnt see coming.
What I would like to know, and possibly get pictures of, is this fun you speak of having while on your period.
Are you taking advantage of the no birth control needed time? Are paint brushes involved? Shop vac?
Oh, have you tried having someone do the tounge FPPTttttttt thing and laughed at the little crimson dots that go flying?
I too like to have fun with periods, so maybe you can help me out with tips on removing that nasty copper like smell from my tube socks.
I'm sorry, I'm usually optimistic, but this was just bad. Even if Arfenhouse is random, it tends to be funny. Some more effort could of been nice as well. It took Misteroo foreverto finish #6 for a reason. To be that randomly funny is a lot harder than it looks.
Also, like said before, it didn't feel at all like Arfenhouse in any way. The only arfenhouse thing i saw was Housemaster and Billy in the beginning, then Joe at the end... Maybe watching all of the Arfenhouse movies in a row then figuring out the actual comedy of similar movies would help with finding the actual comedy inmaking a flash like Arfenhouse. Studying that guy that does animutation all the time could help a ton, too. Arfenhouse may of started as a crappy internet game years ago, but the flash cartoons are a little bit of animutation style mixed in.
Then again, it was an attempt and a tribute to Arfenhouse. And since Arfenhouse is my favorite series. I respect that.
So true, and so funny!!
!! Almost pee-d my pants when Gorillaz came up !!
Very random, graphics were decent for the type of flash. What really made this flash good was the humor, though some things were spins on prior flash toons.
Still very very funny!!! Good job
Yeah i like doing spins on those kinds of things. But whatever. Thanks!
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