Ugh
Okay, i guess if this is your first then fine, you get a three, not a two. Listen to the review before me, he covers some good points.
Show your stuff to several people before you submit. Get their feedback and use their comments. Then revise and rewrite. The quality of this flash is surprisingly terrible. I'm surprised it made it through the portal, and even front page of all things...
Good luck on your next one, i guess...